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[thatrcooper]

373 pages is a publishable length for a small-ish epublisher, right? haha

Or not.

I hope no one was too attached to that last Charlie/Will sex scene, cuz I done cut it. It gone. They needed more talking than humping. Hmm but I might need someone to read it who hasn't suffered through all these previous versions and the babble.

and probably I need to go through again and cut some more from back when I wrote a whole section for NaNoWriMo and just babbling 50,000 words but I want a fresh opinion before I do that

You interested in this. lol

I'll shaddup now. But I am so pleased with myself for cutting it down even this much I had to share. :)

Comments

[coffeebuddha.livejournal.com]

If you trust my opinion, I'd love to read it. :)

And yay for you and your editing ways!

[r-cooper.livejournal.com]

Thank you! We shall see. Technically, my readers haven't fully gotten back to me on this version yet, because it was so frakking LONG, omg.

[coffeebuddha.livejournal.com]

Gotcha. :) Something that length would probably take me about 2-3 days to read, so just let me know if you want another pair of eyes.

[sinjah.livejournal.com]

I am in awe that you managed this.

On one hand, that last scene, no matter how amazing and scorching hot it was, felt a bit off. On the other, when's Will gonna get his spanking? :P

[r-cooper.livejournal.com]

I hated the last sex scene, so I am fine with it gone. (though I have it saved in another file, just in case).

I know. Will needs a real spanking.

Maybe after he worries that Charlie is getting bored and is all jealous of the hot bisexual TA Charlie has that semester who clearly wants Charlie so he brings home a pretty young thing for Charlie and Charlie is like...what...the...fuck...Will?

Then there can be spiky with jealousy from Will threesome and then all will be okay afterward because of the spanking. ??

Maybe.

[dlasta.livejournal.com]

Well don, you editing whiz.:)

[r-cooper.livejournal.com]

It needs another run through, especially though (don't tell sinjah) the alley porn. Ah well.

[dlasta.livejournal.com]

Seriously, yay you. (That's ridiculous amount of work you've done already.)

I suspect Sinjah might know already.:)

[r-cooper.livejournal.com]

I suspect Sinjah might know already.:)

What? How?

:)

[dlasta.livejournal.com]

She's sneaky?