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[thatrcooper]

373 pages is a publishable length for a small-ish epublisher, right? haha

Or not.

I hope no one was too attached to that last Charlie/Will sex scene, cuz I done cut it. It gone. They needed more talking than humping. Hmm but I might need someone to read it who hasn't suffered through all these previous versions and the babble.

and probably I need to go through again and cut some more from back when I wrote a whole section for NaNoWriMo and just babbling 50,000 words but I want a fresh opinion before I do that

You interested in this. lol

I'll shaddup now. But I am so pleased with myself for cutting it down even this much I had to share. :)

Comments

[coffeebuddha.livejournal.com]

If you trust my opinion, I'd love to read it. :)

And yay for you and your editing ways!

[sinjah.livejournal.com]

I am in awe that you managed this.

On one hand, that last scene, no matter how amazing and scorching hot it was, felt a bit off. On the other, when's Will gonna get his spanking? :P

[dlasta.livejournal.com]

Well don, you editing whiz.:)