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[thatrcooper]

373 pages is a publishable length for a small-ish epublisher, right? haha

Or not.

I hope no one was too attached to that last Charlie/Will sex scene, cuz I done cut it. It gone. They needed more talking than humping. Hmm but I might need someone to read it who hasn't suffered through all these previous versions and the babble.

and probably I need to go through again and cut some more from back when I wrote a whole section for NaNoWriMo and just babbling 50,000 words but I want a fresh opinion before I do that

You interested in this. lol

I'll shaddup now. But I am so pleased with myself for cutting it down even this much I had to share. :)

Comments

[r-cooper.livejournal.com]

It needs another run through, especially though (don't tell sinjah) the alley porn. Ah well.

[dlasta.livejournal.com]

Seriously, yay you. (That's ridiculous amount of work you've done already.)

I suspect Sinjah might know already.:)

[r-cooper.livejournal.com]

I suspect Sinjah might know already.:)

What? How?

:)

[dlasta.livejournal.com]

She's sneaky?