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[thatrcooper]

Okay, people who've read Charlie and Will (hereafter to be referred to as either "Chills" or by its working title, "Play It Again, Charlie") I need your last minute complaints/thoughts now, because I've got to get this bitch out before I go insane with it and at this point when I look at it I either blank out or get way too obsessed with commas.

(Delete the comma. Replace the comma. Stare at sentence. Delete the comma. Realize it's not a crucial sentence after all and delete the whole sentence. Scroll down and realize that sentence was actually there to set up something later and was crucial. Oops. Undo "delete". Go back to staring at commas.)

It's getting me nowhere because I can't tell what needs editing anymore. Argh.

I'm gonna go back to reading about Barbados. For research purposes, honestly. It isn't like I can go there.
:(

Comments

[paraxdisepink.livejournal.com]

Still think the novel isn't complete until you make Charlie a werewolf. I don't feel the story can properly be told without this element :P

heh heh heh heh

[r-cooper.livejournal.com]

I kind of already did, I told you! It was just in a different story. haha

He'd be such a good werewolf too!

[dlasta.livejournal.com]

I have sent you email stuff! Rejoice! :)

[r-cooper.livejournal.com]

You are alive, rejoice!

[ciraarana.livejournal.com]

Probably not helpful at all, but I'm really looking forward to reading the boys' story. :)

[r-cooper.livejournal.com]

Sorry. I have been sort of teasing, haven't I? It was unintentional, really. Sometimes I just have to vent/squee/discuss Charlie's awesomeness. :)

I am editing it to submit it as we speak. Hopefully someone will take it.